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Jean McKinney's avatar

Thank you so much! I've had to do a lot of dialogue in this thing and I'm never sure if it works. Funny, this started out as the Hunter's story but actually it seems to have more of an ensemble cast, with Maddalena co-starring.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Excellent dialogue. I loved their back-and-forth.

I've grown to like Maddalena more and more with every chapter. She's got a heroic streak.

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